PERFECT illustration. Good job reworking the story! I The part about English classes is awkward English: change to: just a few times because my teacher was paid more at the school where he worked, so almost before he started, he stopped coming. ......If there is a way to easily add how many kids were on the trip, I think that would be a great detail to add... Great work today!
PERFECT illustration. Good job reworking the story! I
ReplyDeleteThe part about English classes is awkward English: change to:
just a few times because my teacher was paid more at the school where he worked, so almost before he started, he stopped coming.
......If there is a way to easily add how many kids were on the trip, I think that would be a great detail to add...
Great work today!