I don't usually get upset, but there is one thing I hate.
When I go to the Renton Library on the River and make a reservation for a computer,
sometimes sits next to me a guy very dirty, very smelly who is talking to himself all the time
and just saying stupid things and begins making noises with his nose.
When I go to the Renton Library on the River and make a reservation for a computer,
sometimes sits next to me a guy very dirty, very smelly who is talking to himself all the time
and just saying stupid things and begins making noises with his nose.
Sometimes some people sitting close to him ask him to not make much noise but he doesn't care.
And I have seen people working in the library will call attention to him.
So when I see that he will sit next to me I get up no matter if I loose my reservation, this make me very angry.
In conclusion, I am a peaceful person but, I don't like this persons.
So when I see that he will sit next to me I get up no matter if I loose my reservation, this make me very angry.
In conclusion, I am a peaceful person but, I don't like this persons.
Quite a contrast to your "perfect day"! Excellent graphic!
ReplyDeleteI agree completely -- but I think your anger is so strong here it affects your writing a bit....this is almost TOO vivid for the general public! Let's talk about how to rewrite in class.